Thursday 23 February 2017

Waqt Part 57

Chapter 57




This day had turned so peaceful for Maan as he knew his Geet is in home all healthy and cure and his baby Mansi too had one parents with her whole day. Few time they called him so Mansi can hear his voice and play peacefully.

Finally time to go back to his paradise which is not than hell from last 9 month, he is quite and serious type person but still he wants all chirping sounds of his loves once around him. He didn't like silent mansion ever. From the time Geet kept her feet in mansion, it's turned so lively and warm with her echoing sounds of laughter. She is divine souls who just come for him on this earth now her part Mansi is too same.

Maan chain of thought comes to halt with sudden break in car as they come to the mansion and everyone enjoying in garden and too see Maan's car from far Mansi crawled in front of his car so driver put a emergency breaks but there is no fear as this is already instructed that in mansion no one run any vehicle above 20 kmph.

"Aieee tieee" Mansi throw her hands in air and sat in the middle of road for Maan.

Maan broke in a big grin to see her new antics, other too comes there after hearing screeching sounds of tire. Till today Mansi comes on km gate after hearing his car horn but today as she is outside she sat between middle of road just to go for a ride with Maan.

"You are turning so naughty baby" Maan comes out from the car and scooped his devil in his arms and placed so many wet kisses on her face.

"Aieee dhdhhdjdj" Mansi cutely poked her finger in his face.

"Appne dara diya (you scared us)" Geet left a sighed relief to see father daughter "Milan".
"Baby !!!! mumma is scary cat" Maan gave a naughty look to Geet.

"Dadi !!! See him" Geet winched and tried to hide her blushing face in front of all.

"Bhabi!!! Don't change topic, we saw you are blushing with bro naughty looks" yash as usual teased Geet and received a smacked from Dadi.

"Chup badmash" Dadi gave a fake glare to him.

"Maan!!! Take Mansi and Geet both for a riding or else your this devil will not going to keep quite" Dadi patted Mansi back.

"Dadi mai.. I mean.. I will help Meera in warming food" Geet is feeling shy just like a new bride.
"Bhabi you don't worry!!!! We will do everything, you just spend some quality time with bro" meera pushed geet in passenger sit and made her sat inside the car.. Maan all the time giving her naughty looks which are making her nervous, exited or what not.

He promised her to give a new memorable moment to her every day and this is first time in her memory when she is going out with her husband.

Maan gave Mansi to Geet and took driver seat himself and left mansion with his small family. There is big grin on his face, a happiness which is coming directly from his heart.

"Where are we going?" Geet broke peaceful silence.

"To your favorite ice cream parlor, where we go every night with dad when you are small" he said with a smile.


"Really !!! I liked that parlor"

"You fight with others to not change outing place and we ended up there every night because you are the youngest one so dad always listen to you and you devil just showed us a devil winning grin every time" Maan smiled with their childhood memory.

"Really!!! I was so naughty that time" Geet surprised after knowing her own different shades.

"Not naughty but very naughty!!! You every time ended up with some mischievous with my school projects and stand in front of me with your head down and made most innocent face and I always dismissed you without scolding" Maan gave a complaining look and Geet giggled to hear her own antics like that.

"Our Mansi is replica of you.. you know carbon copy" maan words made Geet eye differed to Mansi who is busy watching outside and she creased her head lovely.

"Here!!! We are finally here, comes out you both lazy bumps" Maan teased Geet and her mouth instantly turned in o shape.

But he took Mansi is his one arm and embraced Geet with other one and entered proudly in famous cp ice cream parlor. Geet is blank again, she thought maybe she remember something after seeing her favorite place but no everything seemed new and blank.

"Geet !!!! Stop thinking or else I will kiss you here only" Maan knew what is she thinking and divert her attention is needed now and only his love and naughty talks had this much power.

"Maan..." she moaned slightly.

"Aieee tieee fhfhhfhf" Mansi shrieked to see one waiter took ice cream on other table and Maneet smiled to see her giving most dangerous look to waiter.

"You wait here, I will come with ice creams.. or else she will eat all waiters" Maan kissed  Mansi chubby cheeks who is eager to lick her cone and went to ordered everyone favorite ice cream and his black coffee as usual. 

Geet blink her eye and took Mansi on her lap.

Maan comes with Mansi cone with himself and rest of the order will comes after some minutes and Mansi almost jumped to see her dad with ice cream cone.

She licked her cone very eagerly and messed up her whole face after smacking it in the cone directly.

"Mansi! !! Baby what you did?" Geet tried to clean her face but her small tongue is licking ice cream from the around of her mouth which made maneet broke in big grin they left her to mess up more and enjoy in her own style.

There order is too come and Geet gave a full smile to maan to see her favorite kaju kismish buttery special and relished a bite on her tongue.

"Both are same" maan mumbled and took his coffee sip.

"Maan!!! Aaj ki story" Geet said after realizing day is going to end in few hours whole day she is too busy in girly gossips and their evergreen chatter box Mansi.

"Hmm ok I am going to tell you,  how you came in km and in my life" Maan tried to go slow so this not put pressure on her brain cell.

Geet nodded like a good and exited girl, who just got her favorite candy.

Precap- some Flashback including ... That night of farm house... where maan left them forever.
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16 comments:

  1. Nice update dear Manasi sits in middle on road to see her father Mann took Geet and Manasi to her favourite ice cream palace and there enjoying the ice cream Geet asked about her past

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  2. i m really surprise to see so much updates all together bt excited like hell to read all of them .
    bt one thing i like to say that all the kids in ur story r damn cute nd adorable either it will b mitu or mansi or peehu or kitto.
    nd its difficult to choose any fav from them.
    i love maansi all cute antics .she crawled to road hearing sound of maan car .nd maan loved to see his naughty antics..
    maan took both the girls to ice parlour on dadi's insitence bt get get all shy to go nd yash n meera teased her seeing getting red.
    omg ..mansi ki angry glare to the waiter just like msk .hehehe..
    maan told geet something about their childhood nd her naughtiness which amused geet that she is that much naughty ..
    maan shook his head seeing licking the icecream relishing their ice cream.
    precap is interesting..so excited to know the past story.

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  4. sorry by mistake comment delete ho gaya

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  5. Great part. After long maan was happy while coming back from office. Omg maansi was sitting midst of road. Thankfully driver stopped the car on time. Yash was teasing geet and she was getting shy n all. Finally maneet went outside with mansi. Maan told geet that they are going at her favourite ice cream parlour. Geet was exited but as soon as she entered inside, she was again blank.she was expecting to remember something. Maan diverted her mind by teasing her. Omg both mother a daughter are same. Their exitement seeing their favourite ice cream was adorable.

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  6. Loved it... maan knew geet from childhood.. wow n Mansi's antics r sooo cute

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  7. Lovely update ...Loved maansis cute and adorable antics sitting in the middle of the way of mansion to get her dads attention....loved the way yash teased his bhabhi when geet was blushing seeing maans naughtiness...wow maan took his girls to ice cream parlor by narrating how geet used to be so naughty and always mischievous in her childhood...OMG maansi is just like her dad when it comes to anger and she was glaring waiters in the ice cream parlor when they were delivering ice creams to others...loved the way maansi enjoyed her ice cream in her style by messing her face ....so maan got ready to share the past to geet slowly by keeping her state in his mind....

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  8. hi thanks 4 da pm, sorry 4 late likes n comments! Part 57 - beautiful update! superbly written! Mansi is 2 cute! Maan n Mansi share a lovely bond! she knows when Maan comes home n waits 4 him in the middle of the road! Maan teases Geet! MAaneet n Mansi go to the ice cream parlour! Maan tells Geet she was naughty wen she was small! Mansi is js like her! Mansi glares at the waiter as she wants ice cream! she is like Maan! Mansi enjoys her ice cream! Geet wants to knw their story! Khwaishfan (IF)

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  9. Mansi is too cute... always bring smile on our face with her cute antics..
    and I hope staYing with Mansi will fill the void in geet what.. though she is still getting to know her past from maan... 💝💝

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  10. Amazing update
    Maansi is soo adorable and cute she knows when are Dada comes and kis tarah usse attention Lena hai
    I loved her antics
    Maan daadi ma ke kehne par apni dono jaan ko ice cream parlor lekar jaata hai air waha geet ko uske past ke moments ke baare mai batayga hai ki wo bachpan mai kitni naughty thi
    Beautifully written

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  11. so Maan know that she feels this void n he is trying to divert it with his naughtiness

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  12. Great update!!!Mansi is so cute and adorable....she is so naughty too...Yash teasing Geet...Maan take Geet and Mansi to the ice cream parlour...Loved her cute antics....Loved it so much...

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  13. amazing update... maansi is very naughty and geet is also like her when she is a young... maaneet along with maansi went out for ice cream parlor which is geets favourite in the past... maansi is havinf=g fin licking her icecream...

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  14. Part 57 – loved cutie mansi and her antics. Maan brought them to their fav ice cream parlor and she demanded one memory of them. So maan started how she landed in km & in his life.
    So you will show what happened in past in flashbacks. Curious to know that how she came back to km all happy and accepted that she is his wife and she loves him too.

    If - Madhuri53

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  15. crazycutee

    superb update
    maan is very happy seeing his loveed once r happy after storm in the past 9 month
    geet is scared seeing mansi mischife when she went middle of the road in km after seeing maan car
    maaneet and mansi went for outing and maan took them geet fav ice parlore

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