Thursday 23 February 2017

Waqt 58






Chapter 58

Flashback of their childhood
The great "Amarnath singh khurana" entered in the house with two girls one is his arms and other one was holding his finger. Both girls are looking scared, sad and pale. But Maan's grandfather embrace is quite warm and comfortable for both of them.
Everyone comes in the hall as Maan's grandfather called his grandmother in his heavy voice.
He made one girl who is looking small compare to other one sat on his lap and other on couch.
"Arre Geet, priya come here.." Dadi smiled too see too cute pie here.
"Now they will live here only savitri and I want you make their rooms ready with other children" Amarnath had a powerful aura and nobody have guts to ask questions from him after his decision.
"Ji vo thik hai but still court ka order nahi.." but Amarnath showed her his palm and said in hoarse and stern voice.
"You don't have to think about all this bachiya bhuki hai khana lagwao and I want everyone on dinner table today"
"Jii" but their conversation is disturbed by small girl who is sitting on Amarnath lap.
"Dadu hum yeha rehege" she widens her eye and asked with surprised expression.
"Yes !!!! Geetu .. will you play with me?"
"Haa phir mai apko hara bhi dugi" she exclaimed and Amarnath laughed.
Two curious eye are watching all this from upstairs and he is not other than but Maan who is 15 yr old curious teen right now and studies his passion.
"Ok geetu phir your dadu is ready after dinner we will play one loudo match ok" Geet eye sparked with happiness to heard Amarnath.
"Accha now geetu and priya now you go with Dadi upstairs and I have some work ok than on dinner we are going meet everyone here ok" Amarnath told both girls.
"Aur bhi log hai yeha" again curious geetu asked.
Dadi and dada jii broke in sweet grin.
"Haa baby yeha aur bhi log hai now go with Dadi"
"Otey" geetu said in childish tone n jumped from Amarnath lap and hold Dadi one finger. 
"She is such a little chatter box" Maan mumbled and left to his room.
[its not necessary naa that Maan always hate Geet in their childhood]
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Dadi took both girls in one guest room which temporarily their till the time Dadi make ready their Angel room

"Arre beta hum tu apka luggage magna hi bhule gaya, you wait here I will just come ok" dadi patted both girls cheek.
Both nodded in yes and Dadi left them.
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Geet is 10 yr old but shorter in height so she looked like some 7 yr old girl and her innocence also is like small kids, her two big doe shapes eye wondered here and there curiously and she always ended up with some sweet mischievous. Same happened here, tiny  Geet comes out in corridor to see this new palace which is somewhere like Handa mansion, her curiosity filled mind made her peeped inside every room to see who is living here and at last she peeped inside Maan's bedroom. She squealed in happiness finally found someone in this desert mansion and her shrieked made Maan turned his face from his books and saw same curious eye watching his room excitingly. Geet eye mat Maan's big black eye and her does suddenly showed fear to be caught in her small naughty act but Maan signaled her to come inside near him and she nodded a big no and her to pig tails swirl on her chubby red cheeks.
"Yeha aao" Maan tried once again.. he wriggled his finger.
"Daato gai" she asked whilst biting her upper lips.
"Nahi" his eye had some assuredly, which made Geet come forward inside his room than around his study table than very slowly toward his bed just in front of him.
"Naam kya hai tumhara chatter box" Maan words made Geet glared him and then to see his big form she turned her face and pouted cutely.
"Nahi batao gii" she sniffed.
Maan shook his head and starts to color his model once again whilst Geet sat on his bed and check out his room here and there when her eye went to the showcase where Maan kept his all trophies and her eye twinkled to see her biggest fantasy in front of her so she went near the showcase, Maan observing her all silent moves but didn't said anything.
"Ye mere ko bhi do" Geet Pointed toward her trophy.
Maan raised his one eye brow up.
"Nahi nahi.. mai free mai nahi logi, I will give you my whole piggy bank and app mere ko 2 nahi 3 trophies de do" she started her negotiation with Maan.
"You have to win them, ye piggy bank se nahi aati" maan rolled his eye and once again concentrate on his model work.
Geet faced turned in a big full moon size "you won all?"
Maan only nodded and Geet once again sat on his bed and rest her back on head post comfortably.
"Pyaas lagi hai" she saw a juice is kept nearby table. Maan once again caught her eye on juice pack.
"Le lo" and geet happily took it from side table and going to put straw in it but Maan took it from her small palm and her face fall down.
Maan shake juice pack before handed it her back than eyed her to put straw now "shake before use".
And Geet just nodded and put straw in her mouth and sipped her juice.
After drinking half she kept it again on side table when Maan saw her with confused eye...
bas pate bhar gaya" Maan now understood she is not less a sparrow who wants taste everything here and there or else who left 100 ml juice pack in mid.
To see Maan is fully involved in his work she kept her chin in her both palm and concentrate on his project.
"Apka naam kya hai" she asked after keeping her silence whole 5 minutes.
"Nahi batao tu" he smirked to see her pout as she also answered him same.
"Mat batao mere ko kya" she crunched his nose.
"Accha for how many days you are here" Maan asked with curiosity.
"Don't know after mumma papa went to god, first mama ji took us there he scold me so much" she spread her ting arms to tell the depth of their scolding  "phir dadu come and I am here, sorry sorry we are here.. mai priya dii ko bhule gai..  abb pata nahi kon le jaye gaa" Geet said sadly she is missing her own room and home this is clear from her sad tone.
But Maan is shocked with the truth she also had no mother and father and here he is aloof from the world because god snatched his mother from him but at least he had his own family and home. Maan felt an instant connection with this girl.
Maan saw her sad expression and thought to divert her attention.
"Accha abb kuch kaam karo, vo chart do mujhse" Maan pointed toward his study table and Geet like small toofan went near his study table and come with chart and once again sat on her previous position.
"Kya bana rahe hu" Geet asked wondering her eye on colorful project.
"Dream home" Maan said.
"dream house hota hai buddu.." geet smacked Maan's forehead.
he glared her.. "I know chatter box.. but I want home.. not house... my mom dream" he murmured last part in his mind only.
"Jab ban jaye tu mere ko dena, mai apni doll rakhu gii isme" she said excitedly. This made Maan smiled automatically "hmm!!! But not before I'll show it in my school". "Ok"
Both of their conversation is disturbed by sound of opening door, maan saw back, who is in his room.
"Beta did you see a small girl in white and red frock" tensed dadi asked from Maan. Maan big form is hiding geet completely.
Geet bite her tongue to think she just came out with asking.
"Here is your chatter box" Maan moved little to show Geet who is resting on her stomach and her chin had nestled her palms with the help of her elbow.
Geet stand up at once on the bed all scared to be getting scolding by Dadi. Dadi comes near her.
"So here you are little devil and I searched you in whole mansion" Dadi patted her cheek but Geet thought Dadi is going to slap her like her Mami so she closed her eye tightly to get the blow but nothing comes and Dadi and Maan watching her in confusion.
Geet opened her eye in surprised and asked in meek voice "daatoge nahi".
"Nahi beta" Dadi kissed her forehead.
"Maaro ge bhi nahi" she asked with widen eye.
"Why should I do this? Koi chote bacho ko marta hai" Dadi circled her small waist and pulled her in his embrace.
"Maami marti hai" her eye turned shined with tears and voice trembled.
"Abb koi kuch nahi kahe gaa ok, dadu tabhi yeha laye hai naa apko" Dadi now somewhere understand why His husband went against court orders.
"Pakka"
"Haa pakka abb chalo change your dress than come here after eating some snacks" Dadi helped her from getting down the bed.
"Baad mai change karu abhi inke saath snacks kho phir help bhi karni hai naa mere doll ke house ke liye" Geet is still scared but said what her little heart wants.
"Accha thik hai, Maan I am sending some snacks for both of you" Dadi left both of them and Geet once again climbed on bed.
"Tu apka naam Maan hai" she gave him a toothy smile.
"Nahi james hai" Maan rolled her eye but Geet is confused.
"Phir Dadi nai maan kyu bola" she kept her hands on her side waist and narrowed her eyebrows.
"Ok mera naam Maan singh khurana hai" maan rolled his eye.
"Uff itna lamba name.. Dusht is perfect" she mumbled last line.
"Kya bola"
"Kuch nahi kucha nahi.. chalo chalo doll house bano, kitni baat karte hu app" Geet gave him tapes from cutter.
Maan started his work again and very well understood she loves to win in everything and it's waste of time to go in argument with her.
Flashback end
 
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Precap-  Present - Maan didnt find geet in anywhere in mansion
some Flashback including ... That night of farm house... where maan left them forever.





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16 comments:

  1. Nice update dear daddu brought Geet and priya to km Geet goes to Mann room and talk about his trophy and his school project daddimaa came looking after Geet and told to change and have snacks but she told she change afterwards

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  2. beautiful update..
    so maan,s dadu brought both the girls to km knowing how their cruel mama mami treating them .
    geet is so cute nd naive bt also a chatterbox .
    her convo with amarnat is so cute ..dadi to happy to see both girls.
    she amazed to see the big house n surprise to know that they will now there .
    geet is however mischievious bt also scared as her mama mami behaviour really harshed with her nd make her fear what if they also scold or hit her.
    omg ..geet is so cute ,she asking trophy inexchange of her piggy bnk collection.
    maan shockd to know that her parent died nd thatswhy his dadaji brought them here.he understnd her state as he also lost his mother .
    both of their moments r cute.
    maan asked her to help him to divert her mind .
    dadi send snacks for them as geet asked to eat with maan while helping him.

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  3. It was nice part. Maan's grandfather brought geet and priya at his home. He told everyone that form now they will live her. Geet was really very adorable. In her innocence she told dadi how brutally they were treated by their maami and mama ji. Maneet's first meeting was great. Both connected instantly within few minutes.

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  4. Wat an emotional n heartfelt update small geet is soooo adorable but so sad she lost both her parents ....

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  5. Awesome update ...Felt really bad for geets state when she was a kid and how ill-treated by her maamu and maami...loved dadus decision of getting innocent kids to his house without caring court orders...loved geets chatter box and how much she was a question bank in her childhood...loved maans patience towards geet and how he answered and cared geet when she came into his room...their conversation was so adorable and cute...
    IF ID : SRIIF

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  6. Hi thanks 4 da pm! sorry 4 late likes n comments - internet issues! Part 58 - fab update! brilliantly written! dadaiji brings Geet n Priya 2 KM! Geet is so innocent n cute! Dadaji went against the court order! Maan sees Geet n calls her a chatterbox! Geet enters Maan's room! she is scared he will shout her! Maan assures Geet! she is full of questions! Maaneet connect! Maan lost his mom! Dadi looking 4 Geet! Geet scared n blurts out hw her mamaji hits her! Dadi n Maan shocked! Geet wants 2 stay with Maan! Geet is so bossy! she calls Maan Dusht! khwaishfan (IF)

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  7. awesome n cute update...

    loved it very much...

    thank u very much fr d lovely update...

    eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

    continue soon plz...

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  8. now I understand from where Mansi got her cuteness. geet was too cute..
    "Nahi nahi.. mai free mai nahi logi, I will give you my whole piggy bank and app mere ko 2 nahi 3 trophies de do"😁😁 she thought Maan bought all these trophies..
    poor girl suffered so much in her past but is still happy..

    loved it

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  9. Geet was so adorable :)
    Went to maans room n started her non stop talks :P
    That was so cute when she said she's thirsty n thn drank only a little :P
    Thn the piggy bank part was also cute :P

    IF:...RIDDHIMA...

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  10. Very emotional and heart touching update
    Maan ke daada Ji dono ko isliye apne ghar lekar aaye hai kyuki their parents are died in an accident aur unke mama mami unhe acchi tarah se treat nahi kar rahe the jiska asar abhi bhi geet ke behavior ae pata lagta hai maan is feeling sad for geet
    Maaneet moments are awesome
    I loved that part jab geet maan se kehti hai ki wo usse uski trophy's ke badle usse apni piggy bank dene ka offer deti hai
    Beautifully written

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  11. such a cute 1st meeting
    geet was so innocent n naive
    if priya is her sister y does she wants to harm Geet

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  12. Superb update!!!Loved little Geet...she is so cute and innocent...Awww Geet lost her parents...they died in an accident...Geet and her sister Priya lives in her Mama house...her mama and mami treated her so badly...its really heart wrenching....Loved Maaneet part...its so lovely...Loved it so much...

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  13. nice update... geet is very cute in her childhood.. she is a curious child and made friendship with maan...

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  14. Lovely part..
    Maan ka dadu na geet and priya ko apne ghar laya tha court order ka against geet ka parents ka death ka baad uska mama,mami ka torture sa bacha ka..
    Sachi ma maan na perfect naam dia hai chatter box kitna bolti hai lol kisi ko chance nahi deti usa win karna ka baato sa..

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  15. Part 58 – loved their childhood memories. Geet was so sweet and daring-baaz when she first came to km and then to maan’s room. She liked to show her authority on others in her innocent way. So dadaji brought them b’coss her mama-maji were cruel and how they were treating them. Liked how maan observed her behavior minutely.

    If - Madhuri53

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  16. if id crazycutee
    superb update
    maan gf bought geet and priya from there maternal uncle home against court order
    loved the cute geet talk and her antices

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