Thursday 23 February 2017

One Shot - MY MARRIAGE DAY


MY MARRIAGE DAY By Mitu




Maan and geet one unbreakable pair in this world but destiny.. yes this destiny who take anything from anyone .. snatched their treasure from each other’s and left him to live like zombie.. life is helpless in front of destiney.

Geet happiness is had no bond she is going to marry her childhood love who is known as MSK for whole world but for geet he is only maanu. After heard, that their parent's finalized her marriage with maan. She is dancing on her bed like a mad person sometime blushing in herself sometime smiling; today she got everything in her understanding.

After 7 days she will be with her maan as his wife, but she is pouting with everyone as she wants to go for shopping to choose best for his maan. She wants to look the same the way maan last night sad to her on their chat.

"Common naa mumma I also want to go" geet pleased while her head snaked in her mom neck from behind.

"No geet!!! Bride don’t go out before marriage so we will go only.. You stay here" gert mom said sternly.

"Pleaseee naa mumma" geet pleased again with puppy face.

"Rano take her naa with you, kya purani baatio mai manti hu" mohinder winked to geet.

"Uff meri chalti kaha chalo, go and get ready" geet mom patted her cheek and she jumped in happiness.
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Geet is happily roaming here and there in mall, she choose a 7 color bridal outfit which is showing every color of her life. She is selecting only diamond jewelry as per maan wish.

She day dreaming about everything which will happen after 7 days, she didn’t even noticed that she is on road, she is just walking with smile all lost in her love suddenly a car unbalanced with a big stone and boom.

Everything stopped like wind is no more blowing, time stuck on his place and only one sound echoed in whole surroundings.

"Geettt ttt" maan who is just coming from other side saw geet in pool of blood all lifeless but still a smile adores her lips like she is just get unconscious with his thought.

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Everyone is gathered outside of icu but maan is felt like no more here his eye watching icu door with dead eye like geet took his life inside with her. No tear, no word is coming out from his eye, geet mom dad is shattered to see their so small doll, fighting between life and death.

But maan just standing there with his eye glued on icu gate for his mishty, his soul.

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After 4 days

"Sorry mr.khurana now ms.geet handa left only 2 or 3 days of maybe less , I will suggest you to all talk with last time and free her , I felt like she struggling in her unconscious status also, she is not in peace, let her free everything mr.khurana, god bless you all and her" doctor word pierced maan eye like acid, he is not believing his soul, his life is only counting her last breathe, she is only for some days after that she left him never to come back, he is numb not even a tears coming out from his eye.

"Maan beta ro lijiye" dadi spoke between in her hiccups.

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Maan hugged geet tightly who just opened her eye from darkness; she is also sensing danger which is going to take her away from her maan.

"Maan!!! Darr lag raha hai" geet said in broken voice.

"Nahi mishty your maan is here naa see, no need to scare" maan denied her fear and wiped her tears.

"Maan!!! I want to take my last breathe in your room, our room not in this hospital" geet again made baby face like usual but this time this antics broke down everyone but maan and geet living this last moment of their togetherness.

"Haa geet!!! Hum aaj hii ghar jaye ge haina" maan creased geet face with so much love and care.

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Maan made every arrangement in km for geet treatment, this is 2 days from the time geet sifted here in maan bedroom, and maan is not living her side for even a minute, he didn’t closed his from last days like he wants to observe his mishty inside him, capture her every feature inside him for life time, his hand is consciously threading geet hair.

"Maan!! Tomorrow is our marriage day" geet said meekly.

Maan just turned his face not able to face her anymore, he is dead from inside.

"Maan!!! Tum shaadi karna kisi pyaari sii ladki se" she again whispered.

Maan kept his finger on her lips and nodded no, his eye burning in pain, geet smiled softly.

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Maneet marriage day

Geet breathe are unstable from the morning, everyone is sitting around her with a smile as she wants to see them with smile but from inside everyone is breaking which is some time coming out from their eye.

"Mishty!!" Maan said and filled her partition with his love, and made her his forever, for next every birth, geet eye welled up to see maan as this is last time she is watching him and first time to as she is watching him as her soul mate as husband.

"Dekho maine kitni pyaari ladki se shaadi ki" maan said and hide her in his chest and pour out her pain today, his soul is known that darkness is just next to them.

"I love you hubby" geet whispered with smile and closed them forever to make all of them drown in pool of grief and pain.

Other woman made her ready as a bride for last ritual and maan is doing every ritual for her, just last time.

At last he submitted his geet in fire flames who consumed her body but her soul is still with his maan, whose tears are dried now like just after this life he will also go to her.
Kho gayi hai tu kahi in akash ki uchaiyo mai
Phir bhi tu dhadkati hai kahi isse dil mai
Khud tu chane se soi hai tu
Mager chode diya mujhe teri har yaad mai kaskne ko
Bas yuhi chale jaa raha hu mai
Teri aahato ke ahsaas mai
Zindgi tu chalti jaa rahi hai mager
Marr chuka hu mai kahi tere hi saath mai
Tere mere milan mai
Abhi kuch samay baki
Meri kuch saasie baki hai
Tera kuch intzaar baki hai...
Bas intzaar baki..
Bas aur bas ye intzaar baki hai..



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Maan jerked up on his bad all sweaty and scared, and found himself on his bed, which made him frown about what is happing. Slowly he remembered he slept after geet nonsense chat where she is asking him what if something happened to her and all crap, now this was a nightmare only but still his heart thumping with jet speed and he just stand up with his car key and ran out to go geet house in this morning time.

Dadi shocked to saw maan all in vast and lower and running somewhere in hurry, even maan dad didn’t understand, they called few time but maan is gone, so maan dad raj asked to driver to chase maan as they are scared to saw him like that all worried.

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Here in geet house

This is maneet marriage day finally and geet is sitting between ladies clad in her yellow saree, she is glowing in her maan color. Everyone teasing her and made her read now this red and yellow combination is breathe taking, while whole house is full of guest her all cousin are lattoo on maan but to their bad luck maan is already booked, they are envying geet for this but bride is all lost in her groom naughty talks.

"Hey krishna jii bade gussa hai kal raat se dekha naa abb tak messages bhi nahi kiya, kya karu mai inka, shaadi hone jaa rahi hai mager masti bhi nagi samjhte, aur aap bhi tu samjhdar hu naa apne pass thodi bula lu ge mujhe, I know apne preshan hokar hi mujhe yeha earth per maan ka brain eat karne ko bejha hai haina abb ye maan ko kuan samjhye" geet self talk is continued till she heard some gasping sound in unison.

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On the handa house main door maan is standing only in his vast and lower and looking extremely sexy and delicious and geet cousins jaw are hanged open to see business world king here in night dress. Maan eye restlessly scanned whole house for his geet.

Mohinder saw maan in surprised as today is marriage and here he is standing like that, but he knew maan as he never do anything embarrassing intentionally opposite to geet who is always up to something.

"Maan beta app yeha aise" Mohinder asked and rano also joined him.

"Papa where is geet? Is she ok? I want to meet her now please" maan said with pleading way and one go made other cunning and jealous relative more burn.

Suddenly maan eye stuck on his interest object who is peeping from behind curtains and trying to see from above of other shoulder as what is happening out side.

Maan smiled with mist eye and with look step reached to her and pulled her in his embraced in front of all to soothe his burning heart.

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Maan family also reached and saw confused population of handa house, now they are also in line as nobody know what happened to maan who seem perfectly fine till last night.

"What is he doing? Ye ladka pagal hu gaya hai" raj said to his wife full in fuming mood.

"Chodo naa!!! See him I first thought he is like you work alcoholic only but mera beta tu hero nikala" simaran said with proud and chide raj which made mohinder giggled.

"If you all finished isse wired couple and shocked population ko bhi handle karo abb" rano made them aware about this so awkward situation, where half naked groom is embracing his all wet and covered in turmeric bride in front of owl type population of handa house.

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Geet didn’t understand what happen but after smelling maan, she understand he is her maan only but every thought cross her mind, what is he doing here at this time or more over in this dress, she fumed more to see her cousins ogling on her maan back so she sneaked her hand in maan back and held him tightly and glared them.

Still maan thumping heart is not in peace he is just making sure his love is in his embrace only. Even his whole upper body is smudged in geet haldi but he cared damn about anything right now and press more tightly geet to his body and made his and geet parent’s red in embarrassment.

"Yaar isse ruku" Mohinder murmured in raj ear.

"Hmm" raj hummed and went to maan, geet turned red to see raj but she is caged in maan embrace.

"Maan!!! Yaar chode usse, see all relatives is ready to eat you live" raj said in maan ear and made maan come back to his sense.

Maan saw here and there and reluctant left geet and advert his eye from every one, he also little bit embarrassed but his embarrassment touched heighr when he saw his dress which also now covered with geet haldi, but again geet name made him remembered his nightmare, so he checked geet like kid.

"Are you ok naa" maan restless voice made geet worried.

"Maan!!! Akhir hua kya hai, why are you so worried and come here like that" dadi at last asked in such a voice that maan know he had to answer her.

"Vo dadi!!! I ... " maan told everyone about his nightmare and his worry which left different effect on every one.

Dadi and raj with Mohinder broke in a grin to see their dushat so worried for his mishti and rano and simran hugged geet and checked her like she was really in maan dream.

"Arre chodo abb waise bhi bolte hai kisi ki death sapne mai dekhne se uski umar badti hai" dadi patted maan cheek to see him still worried.

"Ohh no abb I have to bear him some more yr" geet said with mischievous.

"Geettt" raj, Mohinder and maan shouted and unison and made her jumped from her place.

"Bhoute bolne lagi hu tum, ek baat dyan se sun lu jo ulta sidha kal raat ko bole rahi thi or abb bole rahi hu ager phir bola tu mujhse bura koi nahi hoga samjhi" maan hold her tightly from her shoulder and knocked some sense in her super intelligent mind.

"Accha but next time aao tu please dress up hoke aana" geet said with baby puppy face and made other cracked up but maan is still giving her glare.

"Sorry!!! Abb kya bache ki jaan loge" geet said hugged him to soothe his concern wala gussa.

But maan eyes instantly widen with geet statement.

"Maan!!! Mujhe tu kuch nahi hua but ye sab chudile jo tumhe dekhe rahi hai ek do ka tu aaj mai kaam tamam kar dugi" geet fumed near maan ear and broke him also in grin.

"What will I do if she is not here with me" maan thought hugged his life tightly.

"Ummm" elder cleared their throat.

"Yaar did I ever interfere in your romance no naa than please leave us naa" maan said and hurriedly left for upstairs to change his dreamy dress for others or his would be wife eat him in today lunch as maan tandoori.
There life is bliss till they both are together to coloured eact other life.



The end


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14 comments:

  1. I read this one again lovely yaar cherished the moment again
    Maan love for geet and his naughty geet
    Poor shock population hehehe
    Hira2010

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  2. first of all i want to ask u something ,u r from India na ?becoz as i had woke up early today as my bro hv an exam so we all get up early nd at 4 in the morning i just checked my if inbox nd saw ur pm nd i was in shock ,i mean like u updating at midnight nd pm all till 2 or 3 am ...omg i still cant believe it .bt this is awesum start of morning to reading ur stories ..thanku thanku so much ..
    well vaise to main comment subh hi kr deti bt my mom keep naggaing me to sleep again so i hv to put my phone aside nd hv to sleep again ..
    now i got time to catch up here ..

    now ,about the update it is just amazingggg..
    reading the intial part i got really emotional while reading geet died nd that before marriage ..nd maan witnessed the horribe accident n seeing his love dying in fron his eyes..
    nd the way u write the emotional moments which they cherrishing last moments together is so heart touching n defintely so emotional to make any one cry ..
    also the poem is so beautiful nd emotional ..
    bt then after when i read its just a nightmare , i was like what the...
    intially u make us all senti nd cry nd then shocked with a pleasant surprise ..
    i just love every bit of it..
    as soon as maan realised it was a nightmare he rushed to see his mishty as his heart still restless nd only his mishty can soothe his restlessness.
    bt his sudden visit shocked everyone there nd that in his night dress .he hehe ..bt i think it doesnt matter when it matters of hearts.
    geet also shocked to see him bt also droolin her would b hubby in his vest nd lower looking so hot..
    finally he revealed the reason of his sudden behaviour nd everyone understnd his dilemma bt still they teased him for his dress..
    nd geet is so jealous seeing all the girls drooling him which is not tolerable by her nd knowing his mishty very well he rushed to change the dress otherwise either he or those titles defintely kill by her. he he he ..



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  3. Interesting os
    maan saw a sad dream and he wants to see that she is alright.
    Maaneet loves each other so much.
    geet is very naughty.
    id- kamna Gupta

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  4. hey Bhagwan you just gave me heart attack in first half but then phew it was all ok....
    Maan went to his bride's house in just his vest and track pants on their marriage day itself....
    wow ...obviously other girls will get jealous seeing so possessive groom of another girl....
    awesome...
    thanx for links...

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  5. Mindblowingggg OS dear...
    Finally I read dis Os again....
    Thanks for d links....
    I can't stop my tears after reading 1st half ....Heart touching and Beautiful ending moments of Maaneet...
    Totally loved it....

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  6. Wow so beautiful os.
    The dream was worst but reality is sooooo sweet specially the night suit dressedaan ,the haldi huge,bachi ki jaan loge,the man tandoori idea.

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  7. Amazing OS
    First half mai aapne rula diya second half mai umake my day
    Beautifully written

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  8. awesome part..
    omg 1st half na rula dia huma ky KARTA homeri yoh jaan nikal gayi jab geet ki accident and death part read kia..
    par ya sab maan ka dream hai jo geet ka ulta sidha baato sa hua hai..
    maan toh vest ma hi haldi function ma crash kar lia geet ko check karna and dusra ko usa drool karna ka chance vi de dia and puri family embrasee hai maan ki isha act sa par kya kare uska pyar tioh aisa hi hai..
    geet ka nautanki kam nahi hai murder ki planning kar rahi hai jealousy sa..
    if id mona90

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  9. Amzing... emotinal to super romantic....

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  10. Re read again missing this magic thanks for repost it again here
    Please repost dastan aur other os your me fariya20

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