Thursday 23 February 2017

Daring Love Story Part 11


chapter 11

This is a purely imaginary Fiction, nothing is related to history even some place is also not exist on earth. someone have problem pm me than.




Maanveer eye turned normal to see her smirked and a smile starts to played on his rough lips and he eyed to his men to kept their swords in their covers back and all sighed in relief as this mandap can be change in war zone with one negative decision of Maanveer but he took it as marriage teasing, they didn’t know that only Geetangli daring nature making him fall every minute or every second.

Rani maa say for 31 days fast in this crucial situation and with god grace everything went well but still Geetangli mother and father heart is beating fast with the expecting outcome.

Now both Maanveer and Geetangli sat down and pundit jii say to maan to tied "mangalsutra" in Geetangli neck and filled her partition with vermilion and make her fully his with the blessing of god.

Maanveer took mangalsutra from flower gold plate and lalita help him to tied it in Geetangli neck and Maanveer brushed his fingers in Geetangli neck teasingly and he can saw a redness on her chin and he knew this is because of anger not shyness but this is his revenge now than he took a pinch on vermilion and without removing veil he filled her partition and some vermilion fall on her nose naturally and this give little peace to rani maa as here all old ladies said if vermilion naturally fall on bride nose than this means groom is going to love her so much.

Now they are officially husband and wife and pundit jii announced. Now Maanveer first took blessing from his kule pundit than king and rani maa hugged them as son in law and daughters never touched feet of their mother father, now karandeep hugged Maanveer and request him to take care of his princess. Now this is the time of 'mahabhoj' (dinner). So king and rani maa escort Geetangli and Maanveer to the bhoj kash and there is already everything is ready for their bhoj (dinning).

Maanveer and Geetangli sat on two very small traditional stools and in front of them there is a little big stools place for plates, stools are only half foot above from earth only this is the way all king eat.

On Maanveer side adithya sat and Geetangli side lalita sat for help and other also took their placed for dinner. King and rani maa sat near maanveer and Geetangli as this is last dinner with Geetangli after this she will come here as queen of Maanveer.
They at least want to pamper her little bit and showed their affection to her. Geetangli also aware this is her last dinner in Rajbhumi and her father and mother is on same boat like her.

Maanveer starts his dinner and offers first sweet piece to Geetangli and she accepted it silently now Geetangli made him ate some sweet and both starts to feed each other as per ritual, Maanveer called lalita with signal and said something in her ear than she said something in Maanveer ear with a smile, other are watching them in confusion but when maan dip puri in kheer all smiled as he asked Geetangli favorite from lalita and feed Geetangli naughtily and pressed his thump pad on her bottom lips and in reflex Geetangli feed chilies to Maanveer but she didn’t know Maanveer liked spices food so she turned more redder to see him to relishing morsel.

In all dinner their silent fight is continued for Maanveer this is fun and play and for Geetangli this is war and revenge but his so much cool nature toward her made her more fumed.

After dinner they sat in rani vaas as there is little time in Geetangli farewell and Geetangli went inside with rani maa and kept her head in her lap but didn't remove her veil still as she didn’t want to show her vulnerability to her broken mother but she wants some warmth from her to fight in her upcoming life. Her painful moans made leaked rani maa eye also and she bend and hugged her gudia, maybe whole life she is strict with her to follow rules but in her eye she is still small doll who comes to her for her every questions.

Geetangli father also come inside and joined them in this hug he just put Geetangli head on his heart and patted her back.

"Geetangli!!! Gudia now this is the time of your bidai (farewell) come and just send me one message I will be in deli to help you hmm" king console Geetangli who at last broke down with the thought to leave all her own family for forever but this is every daughter destiny but to feel it in reality is really a different feeling all your preparation went in vain when in reality you have to leave everything and go to some unknown house.

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Now maan and his all army waiting on palace gate for Geetangli she comes out with her father mother all crying. Ohh her shivering lips did something in Maanveer heart. She is hugging them and crying her heart out now even all other people come to bid a goodbye to their princess she is hugging each and every lady one by one and touching every old man feet as somewhere all of them are her childhood part like some taught her horse riding so some just picked raw mangoes for her, some simply buy bangles when they went on some other states so some taught her playing with knife, if today she is a daring and beautiful princess than all credits go to them also as they worked behind the curtain their whole life and Geetangli is really found of every hard working and loyal persons.

All rajdarbar member specially blessed her, they knew how intelligent she is , many time she just solved problem with blink of their eye with her wisdom, they are going to lose a diamond of their courtyard.

At last karandeep hugged her who is standing all the time near Maanveer in his respect, Maanveer is amazed to see sister and brother love as karandeep is really crying in front of and this is quite surprising as this is not the behavior of a prince but right now he is only karandeep not any prince who is hugging her gudia.

"Bhai saa!!! Maa saa or pita jii ka dhyan rakhna aur apna bhi (bro!! Take care of mom and dad and yourself too)" Geetangli somehow spoke with a choking throat, all ladies starts to sang a farewell folk song for Geetangli bidai but before they starts to go toward athithi grah (guest palace), one messenger comes to Maanveer and give him some latter of his mother.

Maanveer opened it with a frown and his expression changed little bit first annoyed than sighed.

"Maharaj!! We have to take leave for deli now only" Maanveer said to Geetangli father in seriously manner.

"Abhi tu ratri hu chuki hai maharaj aur isse samay yatra hanikarak hu sakti hai (but right now this is night and this time journey is not safe)" karandeep spoke in concern, all the way are forest roads and lootere and thief are always active at this time.

"Chinta ki koi baat nahi hai rajkumar humari sena ko aadat hai yu raatio mai yatra karne ki app chinta naa kare or abb hume agya de (there is no need to worry prince as our army had habit to journey in nights so plaese give us your leave)" aditya spoke on the behalf of Maanveer.

"Jii maharaj Maanveer jaise apki icha (k king Maanveer as you wish)" king spoke with a sighed.

"Maharaj humari ek prathna hai, jo bhi yeha hua karpya uski doshi Geetangli nahi hai, humara hardya (heart) hum aaj apko de rahe hai karpya inhe aise hii muskarate hui rakhiye gaa (king there is a request, everything happened here before that was not Geetangli mistake and I am giving you my heaet so please take care of her and protect her smile just like now)" at last a father heart didn’t able to stop himself and pleaded to Maanveer to taking care of his gudia, Geetangli hugged her father once again and this time he made her sat in doli for her departure.

Other her females’ friend of Geetangli sat in a bull car which is decorated with all comforts and Maanveer sat on his horse and finally all army followed him with his men, and Geetangli family stands on palace gate till they are able to see barat which is taking their small gudia with them.

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