Thursday 23 February 2017

DARING LOVE STORY Part 10


DARING LOVE STORY


chapter 10

This is a purely imaginary Fiction, nothing is related to history even some place is also not exist on earth. someone have problem pm me than.



In Maanveer tent

Maanveer is lost in his thought as he got news from dile his mother is not happy to return rajbhumi to Geetangli father just for a princess who is already in his clutch but her mother doesn't know that Geetangli will die if he try to touch her shadow without her will before but now she accepted his proposal for her public, and his mother doesn't knew sometime, something are more important and precious from any other rajay just like Geetangli, so he ignored his mother message and starts to getting ready for marriage there is other letter also from his patrani samaya but he didn't bother to even open this, this is Maanveer singh who never respect other emotions and thought and just win what he wanted as there is no true love in his life still. His wifes are only pleasure doll for him and mother is a good advisor when he wants only not in his every personal decision like marrying Geetangli.

He wore rajsi clothes and pagdi with jewelry and looking like a real kind if you forget how ruthless he is. Adi come in his tent and made him wore some khandani shagun necklaces with his mojadi (Indian shoes) and in last give him his pride, his beautiful sword which is shinning like moon whole army and some main like ministers and advisor of Maanveer are went ahead in maanveer bharat.

One old woman put kajal in maanveer eye as per ritual and one man bend and put stool maanveer put is one leg on stool back and sat on the horse as per their rituals, some pundit chanting mantras and did puja before they starts barat for Rajbhumi palace.

All barati starts dance and some artists sang raags with some other instrument and elephants are making environment more royal and mahawat (elephant rider) made elephant to spread perfumes on all barati with flower rain after all this is king Maanveer barat.

Here in rajbhumi palace king and karan deep with their other men waiting for welcoming barat as per their rituals and they saw many lights and jiggling and coming near there palace and sound of dhoals made them them aware about Maanveer arrival for taking their Princess far away from them.

King quietly wiped his eye as some tears are gathered there but he has to show himself strong.

In rani vaas

Rani maa ordered to decorate a puja thaal for Maanveer welcomes as bride mother will tilak to groom before he enter in mandap.

King welcomed maanveer with flowers necklaces and different perfumes and as per ritual karandeep clean his feet with milk and rosy water. Whatever circumstance made them marry but now he is his sister would be husband right now his name mehandi is decorating his sister palm and his well being is contacted with his sister now onward.

They escort Maanveer and other barati inside in front of main gate of palace and rani maa took all evil eye from Maanveer and blessed him and pray that Maanveer heart filled with kindness now onward.


They made sat Maanveer inside and offered him different drinks and dishes but he just took some sweets only as he is eager to see Geetangli in his desired dress.

Pandit jii announced this is best time of "ghatbandan" so Maanveer advisor and other told maan to come in mandap, outside of mandap karandeep took Maanveer shoes and kept them respectfully and king made him sat in mandap just like their "jaimata" (son in law).

5 pundits start chanting holy mantras of marriage and asked for Geetangli so rani maa and other ladies went to rani vaas.

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Princess Geetangli comes in pandla (marriage area) with very soft steps and her friends are encircling her and helping her in walk with this heavy dress there is 'jaimala' in Geetangli hands for Maanveer. And her lips are only visible to other but its also made some prince and other king skipped their heartbeats a pearl is dancing in the center of her rose petals which can be cause of war as everyone wants to win her for himself.

Her soft feet and hands also shining like moon, and Maanveer eye just stuck near her lips only. Some of soldiers comes and from Maanveer side and bow down their hand infront of her and greeted her on the behalf of deli with their down swords in respect.

Geetangli nodded her head and accept their greeting and move on near mandap. Karandeep and king come and escort her in the mandap and made her stand near Maanveer and he also stands up and welcomed Geetangli with respect. Now Geetangli has to make Maanveer wear jaimala but no king will bow their head down and Maanveer height is too much for Geetangli to reach. Now this is the time of examine her intelligence also as she has to wear Maanveer jaimala without any one help.

Geetangli tried to put jaimala in Maanveer neck but Maanveer held his head more high with a smirked. Now she has to think something soon and won this ritual without Maanveer misery.

"Aahhh" Geetangli held her one leg suddenly and made all bow down to see what happen to Princess and Maan also trapped in her plan as her biting her lips in pain made him check her out one time at least and Geetangli hurriedly take advantage of his bow head and placed jaimala in his neck and made all shocked than laughed. Maanveer also smirked with her presence of mind and trick. She is indeed beauty with brain.

A small winning smile is playing on Geetangli lips which made Maanveer skip his heart beats several time.

"I saw your almond eye that day and from last 2 days only you are clouded my mind now this rose petals is touring me to the core to see you face one time, how will I able to control myself after seeing you, you are playing with my sense Geetangli or iska dund tu mile gaa hi apko" maan thought with a glint on naughtiness in his eye.

Pundit jii told them to did some of rituals than called king for kanyadaan and rani maa and king took their place for 'kanyadaan vidhi'.


Geetangli father kept geet hand in Maanveer right palm and kept supari and pan leaf on it than tied their palms together with yellow rashmi clothe and they both give a ahuti in the holy fire now Geetangli is Maanveer responsibility in every expect now pundit told to lalita to did 'gadbandhan' as Geetangli didn't had any sister and lalita is so near to her than pundit told them to stand up and took 7 rounds of holy fire.

First Maanveer come in front and hold Geetangli hand in his manly hands, he amazed that how soft this girl is just like some feather and her anger umm wired combination. Maanveer smiled as he felt Geetangli stiffness as she curled her fingers in his palm. Maanveer is expecting some pinch from her but she is so lost in her own misery.

Now Geetangli come ahead and too remaining 3 rounds around holy fire before they sat down pundit jii stop them.

"Maharaj!! There is one ritual in bride family that bride and groom take their own vows 4 for groom and 3 for bride so it will tell other, what this marriage to mean to them" Geetangli side pundit told to maanveer.

"Hmm!! Aati uttam (hmm!! Interesting)" Maanveer gave his constant in this ritual and take 2 minutes to think about his vows.

Maanveer placed his one hand on fire and starts to speak his vows loudly.

1. Hum apko vachan dete hai rani apki prando ki rakdha apne prando se porb karege (I promised I will protect you before me also)

2. Hum apko vachan dete hai apka maan samman abb humara maan saman hoga.. apoe palan poshan abb humara kartavye hai (I promised now your respect is my respect and your needs now my responsibility).

3. Hum apko vacha dete hai hum puri sachi se ye bandan ka nirvha kare gee (I promised.. I will try with truthfully to make this marriage successful)

4. Hum apko vachan dete hai.. hum apke vicharo aur soch ka bhi saman karege (I promised.. I will respect your suggestions and view also).

Maanveer last promised made everyone amazed as he is not the one who listened to all patently than how did he gave last promised only left them in aww including Geetangli as last promised is so different from his real personality maybe he is trying to impressed me.. Geetangli thought.

Now this is Geetangli turned to take vows so she place her hand above holy fire and speaks in her sweet yet strong voice.. and Maanveer is eagerly waiting to listen her vows now.


5. Hum apko vachan dete hai apke kule ka gurav abb se humara gurav hai (I promised.. Your family proud and respect is now my respect)

6. Hum apko vachan dete hai.. hum apko apna randa swikar karte hai aur apne Krishna jii ke baad apki aagya humare liye pujiniye hai (I promised.. I am accepting you as my husband and after Krishna jii your orders come first for me).

7. Hum apko vachan dete hai.. hum apko har burai ke marg per jaane se raksha karge aur ager muka aaya tu talwar bhi utta lege (I promised.. I will never let you go on bad path if needs come I will take out my srowd also).

Now this is the time to be shocked gor Maanveer as indeed this is clearly indirect insult of Maanveer as last vow by Geetangli is pointing on his ruthless nature Maanveer eye turned out red and palm turned in fists to controlling himself and in reality many kings and prince starts to shiver for Maanveer warmth even some of his men took out their sword also but maan eye are still stuck on her lips which right now smirking on her won. 

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