Thursday 23 February 2017

Daring Love story Part 1





Daring Love Story 



This is my Dream story from last 8 yrs.. i am so found of historical shows like prithvi raj chuhan or meera bai, jodha akber movie, ramayan, mahabharat, shri krishna and ete. so they all are my inspiration.. but only inspiration all story is my imagination.

ps: this is not related with history anywhere.. this is the piece of imagination. I red some historical ff before also this is far away from them, for any other query pm me.
i already wrote 15 chapter of this story but will post after 15 days 


Maanveer singh khurana
Geetangli rajput
Samaya singh maan patrani (main queen)
Sakshi singh maan rani (queen)
Aditya singh maan right hand

Karan deep geet brother
Sobitmal Rajbhumi king right hand



This story is 800 yr old love story a daring love story.
both are hindu here

The great king of india Maanveer singh.. or Daring princess Geetangli 


chapter 1
This is a purely imaginary Fiction, nothing is related to history even some place is also not exist on earth. someone have problem pm me than.

Maanveer singh is a terror for whole other districts kings in india.. one mistake and you will meet with your death without any second thought.. this is what maanveer singh had in his blood veins.. rudeness.. ruling on others.. ego.. shrewd king.. with a super clever and cunning brain.. he only knew how to win nothing less than this.. now he almost won all states of India and now they are surviving under his wings only.. they have to bow their head in front of this egoistic young king who is half age compare to others.. they are now darbari (members of his courtyard).. but they have to bear this for their stay on earth.. had to pay him taxes also.. his one glare and the other king cover with sweat and left their swords in the war zone.

He had almost 20 queens in his 'kash' (private wing).. but for him they are just queens and his wife's whom he won after fights.. maanveer ki zindgi mai pyaar ke koi mayne nahi hai.. he knew how to used others for his satisfaction.. he had 2 sons also one with his patrani (main queen) or one with small rani.. in reality he is not found of children as he wants to devour his queens beauty all for himself.. but off course ek patrani ka scthan (place) is just below to king so Rani mahal mai sirf or sirf patrani samaya singh kI hi agya manye hai (main queen order is last order for other small queens.. they have to listen to her only).

All queens tried to woo maan as than only they will gain respect  from others.. but maan only knows used and throw still there is no even one queen is able to rule over maanveer.. maybe he still didnt had any Daring queen for whom herself respect means more from her life.. maan only heard about rajkumaries who worships mahadev for their husband..
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Maan just come in his kash (private wings)

"Padhariye maharaj!!! Bhojan taiyaar hai.. grahan karne ki kirpa kare (welcome king!!! Lunch is ready.. please have it)" samaya (main queen) spoke and bow her head in front of maan in respect..

only she had guts to talk with maan other are always fumbled in front him.. but she had a huge ego and really rude with slaves (daas or daasiya) even sometime other queens also have to bear her attitude because of her post.

"Hmm!! Prosvayi karai ye hum aate hai (hmm!! You serves I am just coming)" maan spoke while taking off his heavy royal coat.. and some rings with the help of his second main queen sakhsi.

"Daasi aagya ka palan hu (slave flow orders)" samaya clapped her hand and send her personal daasi for pre preparation.

"Maharani!!! Hum aaj shaam ko rajbhumi ki taraf nikale rahe hai jung ke liye.. asha hai aap ko pata hai kya karna hai (queen!! I am going rajbhumi for war hope you know that your work)" maan spoke in so hard voice and sakshi shivered with his roared voice only.. and dropped his ring finger on floor.

Maanveer just glare her and she left from there after murmured a sorry.. her tears is leaking and forehead is full with sweats pearl.

"Maharani!!! Hum inhe dubara apne kash mai naa dekhe (queen!!! I don't want to see her again my wing)" maan roared and send shivers in all slaves bodies.

"Jii maharaj!!! Shama kar dijiye (yes king!!! Forgive her)" samaya spoke in shivering voice.

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This is maanveer singh khurana.. ruthless and A Ruler.. no matter what if he is in his private wings with his wifes or in war in front of his enemy.

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Maan left to far zone and reached on rajbhumi border after 5 days.. they give time to rajbhumi king for surrender in front of delhi maharaj maanveer singh but being a rajput he didn't except this and now maan is here with army to win over rajbhumi .. his right hand aditya singh just come in his tambu (tent).

"Pradam maharaj!!! Humhara akhri dute bhi wapas aa gaya hai shatru (enemy) chavni se abb yudh hii akhari hatiyaar hai app ki aagya hu tu aakarmad (attack) ka adesh diya jaye (hello king!!! Our last messenger is also back they only wants war now so if you are agree can we approach for fight)" aditya spoke with bow head he is one of old and loyal man of maanveer.

"Kal subha suryauday ke sath yudh ka arambh hoga ( tomorrow with first ray of sun we will attack on them)" maanveer spoke in his usual deep and roaring voice.

"Jaise aagya maharaj (as per your order king)" aditya spoke and left the royal tent for preparation of morning again he has to kill innocent people's but now this is destiny only.. maanveer is only knew how to kill?.. all just waiting someone come and blossoms love in his stone hear but all his queens are failed.

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precap: geetangli entry
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"MAIN QUEEN" = MAHARAI YA PATRANI
QUEEN = RANI

PS: THAT TIME KING IS USED TO HAD MANY WIFES SO HAVE YOUR FAITH IN ME THANK YOU.

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